Reflections

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by dream lady (move over school!) on Saturday, 24-Feb-2007 14:30:44

He isn't so hard to understand,
This man of a thousand words and a million thoughts,
This man who hides behind his ego,
Who loves the life he has
And the people in it.
He thinks deep but says little,
And yet, though he thinks he's not,
His transparency is there,
For those who will
Take the time to look
behind his mask of shyness,
No, he's not arogant,
Though some might think so,
But he's a paradox of insecurity
And self-assured logic,
A walking contridiction,
Who seems to be a puzzle,
Yet he's just a man with hopes,
And dreams,
And feelings.

Post 2 by Farzana (Veteran Zoner) on Saturday, 24-Feb-2007 15:02:13

Interesting?

Post 3 by dream lady (move over school!) on Saturday, 24-Feb-2007 15:44:48

Thanks for reading my stuff.

Post 4 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Saturday, 24-Feb-2007 17:48:18

I really like this good job

Post 5 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Sunday, 25-Feb-2007 13:15:00

I like this, especially the ending "Yet he's just a man with hopes,
And dreams,
And feelings."

Bob

Post 6 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 01-Mar-2007 8:43:49

Well written and executed I like it..smile